In writing we are learning complex sentences. we had to make a story up or a backstory.
we had mouse for sale as insperiain to write a story or we could write about mouse for sale
or a back story. We highlighted some of our sentences red because they were a complex sentence.
A complex sentence is a sentence that needs the first bit to stand alone.
Example of a complex sentence:
My cat Jake is fluffly, with white fur.
This is a complex sentence because (with white fur) needs the other bit to make sense.
Cause (with white fur) can't stand alone because it won't make sense.
Feedback: you did really well at explaining your story. William b
Feedforward: you could make it like two more sentences. William b
Evaluation: I think I need to get more words and details in my writing but otherwise I think it's good.
My goal is complex sentences.
Cat for sale.