Tuesday, 26 May 2015

writing portfolio sample

In writing we are learning complex sentences. we had to make a story up or a backstory.
we had mouse for sale as insperiain to write a story or we could write about mouse for sale 
or a back story. We highlighted some of our sentences red because they were a complex sentence. 

Big idea:
A complex sentence is a sentence that needs the first bit to stand alone.
Example of a complex sentence:

My cat Jake is fluffly, with white fur.
This is a complex sentence because (with white fur) needs the other bit to make sense.
Cause (with white fur) can't stand alone because it won't make sense.

Feedback: you did really well at explaining your story. William b

Feedforward: you could make it like two more sentences. William b

Evaluation: I think I need to get more words and details in my writing but otherwise I think it's good.
My goal is complex sentences. 

Cat for sale.

Thursday, 21 May 2015

Catch me if you can post

Catch Me If You Can- Defence
Every week we learn about skills and movement that will help us play sports. This term’s focus has been around defense. We made a video showing some of the goals we have been practicing. I have highlighted the thing I think I have done well YELLOW and one thing I would like to work on PINK.

WALT: Defensive skills and movements
Success Criteria:
Body Movement
  • Weight on balls of feet
  • Feet shoulder width apart.
  • Knees flexed
  • Concentration and eyes on ball, head and eyes up
  • Quick small feet, stay on balls of my feet
  • Take feet to ball.
  • Land with an SBP
  • Body angled to see player angle
  • Anticipate pass and player.
Restrictive Marking
  • Meet player as they start towards the ball/where they want to go
  • stay close to the attacking player 
  • Head and eyes up, arms close to body to avoid obstruction/contact
  • Angle body so attacking player is ‘pushed away from where he/she

Feedforward: next time you could work on your timing.

Feedback: you did good because you tried your best to intasept the ball.

I'm not much of a fan of cmiyc but I try my best and I work hard on defending, dogging, attacking and catching.  


Monday, 11 May 2015

Sea turtles

Sea turtle facts

Sea turtles take 2-3 years to finish their migration, how cool is that. Did you know that some types of sea turtles can weigh up to 1000 pounds, and that is awesome.  Why to sea turtles travel 1000 kilometres? Because they do it to finish their migration, and to lay their eggs in the sand that they were born. Their are two types of turtles, the long neck and the leather back, is that cool. The long neck can weigh up 1000 pounds.