Sunday, 29 November 2015

cinqians with troy

Description: in poetry with troy we had to do a cinquain about our passion. My passion is gaming. A cinquain has a patten of syllables 2,4,6,8,2



                                  Gaming


Diamonds
dark and light sky 
smelting ,mining ,crafting
lava flowing ,water glistening
                                             Minecraft.


Feedback/Feedfoward: T think you did a good job on using descriptive words next time you could
add a bit more detail about minecraft.

link to video
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/14s0Z9AIovOBEwwhZW1gRqutQA-4RQbcm2K5rMuj4e30/embed?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000


evuleation: i think i did well at my ciqwain because i TOOK MY TIME AND ADDED COMERS.
MY FAVORITE WORD IS MINECRAFT BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT THE POEM IS ABOUT.







Tuesday, 17 November 2015

Free verse poetry

Free verse poetry writing
Click lick lick meow, wake up, lamp on. 

See bright blue eyes, fluffy fur ball on bed.

Purrs all around, meow meow.                                                                                                  

Huh, see creamy kitten with a black face.


Evaluation :
I think i did okay with my senses but i don't think used the best of my abitlty's. But I think I used lots of language features.